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Er der en venlig sjæl der gider at hjælpe med at læse korrektur på denne korte tekst?

Er det velformuleret til brug til et online kunst galleri?
Eller er det amatør agtigt?

lyder det for "dansk" hvis i forstår hvad jeg mener.

Alle forslag til forbedringer modtages med kyshånd, udover pointene
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I am the owner and director of "***** Art Gallery" of Fine Arts.

Having actually begun painting myself at a young age, I soon found my
passion for art. A field I started out with, 23 years ago.
I am fascinated by the Internet, because it gives me the opportunity
to meet other art lovers from various countries around the world.
The internet makes it possible to choose and purchace the art you like,
without having to leave the comfort of your home.
In our internet Art-shop, we aim to offer our customers
professional assistance, in choosing interesting works
of art, that "pleases the eye".

*****Art Gallery presents all styles of Art, painted by different Artists from
all over the world.

***** *******

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Hej her er mit forslag
I am the owner and director of "*****” Art Gallery" of Fine Arts.

Actually I began painting at a young age, 23 years ago. soon I found my
passion for art.

I am fascinated by the Internet, because it gives me the opportunity
to meet other art lovers from various countries around the world.
The internet makes it possible to choose and purchase the art you like,
without having to leave the comfort of your home.
In our internet Art-shop, we aim to offer our customers
professional assistance, in choosing interesting works
of art, which "pleases the eye".

*****Art Gallery presents all styles of Art, painted by different Artists from
all over the world.

***** *******
Mvh B&S

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I am the owner and director of "***** Art Gallery" of Fine Arts.

I began painting myself at a young age. I soon found my
passion for art. A field I started out with, 23 years ago.
The Internet fascinates me, because it gives me the opportunity
to meet other art lovers from various countries around the world.
The Internet makes it possible to choose and purchase the art you like,
without having to leave the comfort of your home.
In our Internet Art-shop, we aim to offer our customers
professional assistance, in choosing interesting works
of art that "pleases the eye".

*****Art Gallery presents all styles of Art, painted by different Artists from
all over the world.

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