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hei er der nogen der kan rette det her for mig:

(komma/grammatik/ordvalg/ordstiling)

tusinde tak.

her er den:

Following history is told about the famouse painter. One day, as he sat on a restaurant and enjoyed his dinner, a getleman and a lady came in and took place by the table just oppsite him. The lady was very talkative, and when she talked wery loud, he couldn't avoid to hear nearly every to hear nearly every thing, that she said, even though that it not was habits to hear other peoples conversation. They had evidently visit a picture exhibition and her foolish remark about, what she had seen annoyed him a great deal. After that she began to critici/se them, their sat by the other tables, and when she finite sank the woise to a whispering and both she and the gentleman on the same time saw at him, he understood that now he was object for theirs conversation. He took quietly his sketch book out of the pocket and began to draw in it, as he sometimes throwed a flash over on the lady. After a little while the gentleman stand up, and walked over to him and said angrily. "My gentleman I forbid you to draw my vife, I wouldn't have that you shall go around with hers portrait in the pocket". To the answer the painter passed his his book and said in an innocent sound. "Is that yours vifes portrait." He had drawed a goose.

mvh.
Mads J.

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Hvad skal du bruge den til?

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En TOTALT ommer

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Bare én sætning:

a getleman and a lady came in and took place by the table just oppsite him.
a gentleman bedre med entered the restaurent, at the table og opposite him...

4 fejl i 1 sætning, som refi: Om igen, Svend

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Oversat:
En herre og en dame kom ind og fandt sted forbi bordet netop modsat ham

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Jeg synes, I er lidt grove

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come on gutter..

det skal bare rettes...

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Hvad skal det bruges til?

For at gentage mig selv

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Det er en "slags" aflevering..

skole. 8. klasse

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Ok,

Først læser du den kritisk igennem igen.
Så finder du nok nogle af fejlene.
Derefter laver du spell check.
Der finder du et par til.
... og så aflevere du den med resten af fejlene.

Frieda
engelsklærer,
der meget gerne vil se, hvad hendes elever kan og ikke kan

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meget pedagogisk frieda..

men kan ikke rette den mere en det her..:

pleassssssss help.
får 100 xtra point..

The following story is written about the famous painter. One day, as he sat on a restaurant and enjoyed his dinner, a gentleman and a lady came in and took place by the table just opposite him. The lady was very talkative, and when she talked very loud, he couldn't avoid hearing nearly every to hear nearly every thing, that she said, even though that it not was habits to hear other peoples conversation. They had evidently visit a picture exhibition and her foolish remark about, what she had seen annoyed him a great deal. After that she began to criticize them, their sat by the other tables, and when she finite sank the voice to a whispering and both she and the gentleman on the same time saw at him, he understood that now he was object for theirs conversation. He took quietly his sketch book out of the pocket and began to draw in it, as he sometimes troughed a flash over on the lady. After a little while the gentleman stand up, and walked over to him and said angrily. "My gentleman I forbid you to draw my wife, I wouldn't have that you shall go around with hers portrait in the pocket". To the answer the painter passed his book and said in an innocent sound. "Is that yours wife portrait." He had drawn a goose.

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hvis du sætter teksten ind i word, kan du rette den

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